I felt that the placement of the film title “Brink” and our main actors name “Patrick Manginsay” appeared out of place on the magazine cover. I stated previously that I had placed this featured article title on the left third in order for our audiences to notice it first and this happens to be the issue. It appears that the placement of the title takes too much from the main image of the magazine cover and I have therefore addressed this issue with a couple of variations. Below are the variations of different main article placements, I also changed the typography of the actor’s name in order to have some lower case lettering on the front page:
By placing the title on the bottom right, it is intended that the audience will see this last, not only will they know what the film title is, but it is likely that they will take a reading on the main image before even seeing the main article. Since the main image is a very strong image that hints drivers in our plot, we want this to be the main focus of the cover, without the titles taking too much away from it. Some variations may feature the title centered and helps with the symmetry of the page and compliment the minimal style of the page as a whole.